Friday, November 22, 2013

Rhyme Disease (A Poem by Me)



Could have written Shakespeare's sonnets
If given half the time
But have no loving fondness
For making my thoughts rhyme

Who was it that decided
That the fruits of someone’s soul
Should be organized and guided
With rhyming as a goal?

For as a writing tool
It is as nifty as can be
But creatively it’s cruel
And makes one less than free.

So let your heart emerge
In a format all your own
Hold back not that smart urge
Rejoice in style overthrown



(Y ahora una traducción al español a pesar de podría perder un poco en la traducción. Con mucho amor para todos ustedes)


Podría haber escrito sonetos de Shakespeare
Si se les da la mitad del tiempo
Pero no afecto amoroso
Para hacer mis pensamientos rima

Que fue lo que decidió
Que los frutos del alma de alguien
Deben ser organizadas y guiadas
¿Con rimas como meta?

Para como una herramienta de escritura
Es tan ingenioso como puede ser
Pero creativamente es cruel
Y hace menos de gratis.

Deja que tu corazón emergen
En un formato de todos su propio
Retener no ese impulso inteligente
Regocíjense en estilo derrocado




Thank you so much for coming to visit, so amazing to have you stop by.  Wishing you a wonderful weekend and all the best.  Oh so many hugs all around :)





26 comments:

  1. wow! you are good in expressing through peoms! :)

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  2. The pictures are so cuuute and the poem too ;)

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    1. How very sweet of you, lovely lady :) So appreciate it!

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  3. howlong did it take you to write that? it's awesome!!

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    1. The first stanza came to me at work then sat down and wrote the rest that night when I got home. Thanks, darling, for your encouragement. So wonderful!

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  4. Loved the poems and the kitty pics are marvelous!! thank you so much for linking up with my monday linkup Shamu.

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    1. Thanks so much and thanks for hosting it too :)

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  5. Yes, just write in a way that's just you!

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  6. Cool poem and love the cat photos.

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  7. Love the last part... <3

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  8. Loved the poems and the kitty pics are marvelous! Nice blog, would you like to follow each other?
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    1. Of course, dear. Your blog is fantastic. What a gorgeous lady :)

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  9. Love the poem and thank you for write in spanish!! I love to read poems! :D I fall in love the last photo... It's perfect....!


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    1. Glad you liked the Spanish, sweetie. Want to make sure to be as inclusive as I can for my sweet readers :)

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  10. HI dear
    Oh, thanks for translating your poem to spanish, Love the way you write :)
    xoxo

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    1. Wow, thank you so much! You are so kind to me, dear. Make me smile so :)

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  11. So cool, love that you were able to write this in Spanish too!

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    1. Thanks, lovely senator. I love how global my followers are so just trying to keep up :)

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  12. Well I think we already do, sweetie. And I am so glad for it!

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  13. Very nice poem, and sweet how you translated it into Spanish as well

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    1. Thank you, DC. So wonderful to have you stop by. Big fan of your cool blog :)

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  14. superbly written, very well expressed!

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