Saturday, November 9, 2013

Sometimes (A Poem by Me)





Sometimes

for our own good

I dream of having the ability

to spare you the agony

the despair

the vivid, hopeless pain

of endings

crash landings

failing.




Sharing your whole soul

with a passion

or a person

only to have it vanish

sometimes in a moment

sometimes in many piled high.




The dreams you had

the faith, the investment

the love you tenderly nurtured

Blasted from your heart

sometimes by fear

sometimes by cruel misfortune.




Ah, but as dearly as I wish

to spare you suffering

I must confess a wonderful joy

in watching you arise once more

sometimes slow and tentative

sometimes resilient and bold

never the previous you

reinvented

wiser.




Fresh

scarlet

scars

still stinging

but well-earned

following a heart

you once trusted

and will once more.

16 comments:

  1. oh wow, you amaze me sometimes, that is truly gorgeous

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    1. Thanks so much, sweetie. Means so much that you like it.

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  2. wow. this is just so inspiring of you :)

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    1. Very sweet of you. You were actually one of the people going through my head when I was writing it so I am extra glad you enjoyed it :)

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  3. That second to the last stanza...my fav! Lovely stuff...Daphne would be so proud to know you have so much more in that ascotted little head than blond roots! NHL PBS

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    1. Tint lightning bolts of creativity in an otherwise cloudless mind. Thanks, Peeber and LONHL to you as well.

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  4. Wow, this is some deep stuff. Definitely made me feel sad

    The Dragonfruit Diaries

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    1. So cool all the different reactions to it and I really appreciate yours sweet senator :)

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  5. Write more sentiments for our souls to gravitate to. Beautiful piece over here

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  6. Beautiful piece!! You're absolutely poet!!

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  7. I don't know english well, but what i understood in this poem- it was amazing!!
    I'd like to read more of you poems!!

    http://koluirina.blogspot.ru/

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    1. So wonderful. Wish I knew Russian well enough to write poems in it. Thank you sweetie :)

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    1. Indeed it is dear. And you wear them wonderfully :)

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