Saturday, November 9, 2013
Sometimes (A Poem by Me)
Sometimes
for our own good
I dream of having the ability
to spare you the agony
the despair
the vivid, hopeless pain
of endings
crash landings
failing.
Sharing your whole soul
with a passion
or a person
only to have it vanish
sometimes in a moment
sometimes in many piled high.
The dreams you had
the faith, the investment
the love you tenderly nurtured
Blasted from your heart
sometimes by fear
sometimes by cruel misfortune.
Ah, but as dearly as I wish
to spare you suffering
I must confess a wonderful joy
in watching you arise once more
sometimes slow and tentative
sometimes resilient and bold
never the previous you
reinvented
wiser.
Fresh
scarlet
scars
still stinging
but well-earned
following a heart
you once trusted
and will once more.

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Very sweet of you. You were actually one of the people going through my head when I was writing it so I am extra glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteThat second to the last stanza...my fav! Lovely stuff...Daphne would be so proud to know you have so much more in that ascotted little head than blond roots! NHL PBS
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So cool all the different reactions to it and I really appreciate yours sweet senator :)
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DeleteBeautiful piece!! You're absolutely poet!!
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You are so sweet! Thanks so much :)
DeleteI don't know english well, but what i understood in this poem- it was amazing!!
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So wonderful. Wish I knew Russian well enough to write poems in it. Thank you sweetie :)
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