Tuesday, March 25, 2014
Much Less Cold / Mucho menos frío
My bravery
Entangles
With
Your slavery
To ideas
And responses
Too lazy
And narrow
To respect
I bang up
Against
Your hang ups
They bruise my heart
As you guard your art
Appreciation
Defined
By you alone
The prospect
Of perspective
Dim.
Answers
Bound by ignorance
Void of depth
Avoiding
Acceptance
Replaced by
An arrogance
An amnesia
An admission
Accidental
Of absent
Compassion
You speak in reflex
Ignore all context
Guard closely
What is meant
To be shared
Freely
Is your world
So full of souls
So full of compassion
That this one
Does not merit
A reaction
Much less cold?
Mi valentía
Enreda
Con
Su esclavitud
A las ideas
Y las respuestas
Pereza
Y estrecho
A respetar
Yo golpeé
Contra
Hang ups
Marca mi corazón
Como guarda tu arte
Agradecimiento
Define
Por ti solo
La perspectiva
De la perspectiva
Dim.
Respuestas
Obligado por la ignorancia
Vacío de la profundidad
Evitando
Aceptación
Sustituido por
Una arrogancia
Amnesia
Una admisión
Accidental
De ausente
Compasión
Hablar de reflejo
Ignorar todo contexto
Vigilar estrechamente
¿Qué se entiende
Para ser compartido
Libremente
Es tu mundo
Tan lleno de almas
Tan lleno de compasión
Que éste
No merece
Una reacción
¿Mucho menos frío?



What meaningful words. Love the snowy pictures.
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Thank you, sweetie. It is all gone now, for a while anyway :)
DeleteWowww, such a lovely...I have no right words to describe this poem's beauty! It touches my heart. What beautiful words you have used Sham, sometimes your poems make me happy and sometimes sad! I really love this poem especially this part:Is your world
ReplyDeleteSo full of souls
So full of compassion
That this one
Does not merit
A reaction
Much less cold?
Great and incredible!! Have a great day <3
It is wonderful to hear how my poems touch you, dear. I always hope someone might find something in them so your comments always make me so happy :) Enjoy your day too!
DeleteQue bonito poema.
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DeleteAw this was a beautiful poem! I really enjoyed it! I think my favorite part was the first few lines:
ReplyDeleteMy bravery
Entangles
With
Your slavery
To ideas
And responses
Too lazy
And narrow
To respect
So beautiful! Can't wait to read more! xx
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Thank you SO much, dear. Yours words are very kind and inspirational :)
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ReplyDeleteAs always, you made a wonderful poem, and love the pictures you use with it :)
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Thank you, sweetheart. Your visits bring me such joy :) xoxo
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You are so sweet, gorgeous lady :) Thanks for your visit!
Deletethis one made me sad :(
ReplyDeletehey I can't wait until the snow melts and you write some happy stiff about the birds and the sun :)
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I am more waiting for some people to melt than the snow. The snow makes me very happy. A poem about birds....hmmmm, Challenge Accepted!!! :D
DeleteDeep words, slightly sad. Love the photos.
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Thank you, dear. You are so kind!
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Your words are like pearls. Lovely poem. It is sad yet beautiful. Hope all's well at your end.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, sweetie. And your words to me are wonderfully dear :)
DeleteHave a very beautiful day Sham! xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, darling. You too :) xoxoxoxoxo
Deletehi Shamu,very nice words always,love your poem
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You are so sweet, dear. Thank you for your visit :) xoxo
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You are so sweet. Thanks so much!!! :)
DeleteOooh, I can feel the coldness in this one- emotionally as well as the imagery!x
ReplyDeleteBeen feeling very chilled lately but trying to focus on those with warmer hearts, like you, dear :)
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