And all at once
I stood upon a high, high hill
And a voice spoke
As thunderous as the most mighty storm
"Behold"
And across the bright, blue sky
Darkness crept
Devouring all light
Y todos a la vez
Me paré sobre un alto, colina alta
Y una voz habló
Como un estruendoso como la tormenta más poderosa
"He aquí"
Y en todo el, cielo azul brillante
deslizó la Oscuridad
Devorando toda la luz
And the darkness spread forth apace
Unrestrained
Transforming day
To a night the world had never seen
The last, long night
It would ever see
Y la oscuridad se extendió sucesivamente a buen ritmo
desenfrenado
Transformando día
Para una noche que el mundo nunca había visto
La última, la noche
Sería a ver
The sun burned with great fury
Against this withering assault
Firey flames as tall as the world itself
Lashed out to meet it
To drive it back
The darkness did not falter
And a quiet, dull chuckle
Echoed to every corner
To every ear
Because he who ruled the darkness
For him fire had no fear
El sol ardía con gran furia
En este asalto fulminante
Firey llamas tan altas como el mundo mismo
Arremetido a su encuentro
Para conducir de nuevo
La oscuridad no vaciló
Y un lugar tranquilo, sin brillo risa
Se hizo eco a todos los rincones
Para todos los oídos
Porque él que gobernó la oscuridad
Para él, el fuego no tenía miedo



oh my God..i was afraid of reading the Revelation before, but I read it this time because I believe God made it for a purpose, and that is the coming of paradise..
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Thank you so much, lovely! Your words are so beautiful and really make me think. We will see what happens in part 2 :)
DeleteIt certainly sounds very much in the toting style of St Peter. Who is chuckling though? Slightly unnerving.
ReplyDeletePeter? Wow, thanks. I was going for that tone but I kept having trouble staying with it. The tale was overpowering the tone. Who is chuckling? You mean it wasn't you?
DeleteWriting, not toting!
ReplyDeleteUn poema muy profundo en donde las palabras tienen un significado muy bello.
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Thank you so much television star. I have been holding it in for a while. Kisses
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ReplyDeleteThank you so much, sweet friend. I cannot promise less scary in part II. Happy Friday lovely!
DeleteBeautifully written! Sounds like you have a way with words.
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DeleteVery realistic...strong...scary...
ReplyDeleteYou will likely call me crazy but it feels very strong and real to me too. Thanks gorgeous!
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DeleteI love the finishing words..and I believe them! Fire isn't afraid of dark...this poem reminded me of the Lord of Light by Roger Zelanzny.
ReplyDeleteIt is a very powerful poem, bibical and epic in feeling...I see why some of the above comments compare it with Revealation.
Have a great day!
P.s.Sorry to disappoint, but no bikini shots.
Well I was listening to the LOTR soundtrack as I wrote it so...almost. Thank you so much. You really absorbed it and felt it. As for the P.S. that genuinely made me sad. Really had my hopes up. But I do appreciate you letting me know.
DeleteI liked the LOTR soundtrack but I still prefer the books to the movies because they are more deep and sophisticated. I was 10 when I read the LOTR for the first time so as a long time fan I was a bit critical about the films:)
DeleteI would recommend Lord of Light, it's totally unique.
p.s. No reason to be sad about:) Nothing that can't be seen someplace else:)
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Thank you so much, beautiful :)
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This poem is very impressive and very strong!
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Happy Monday dear! Kisses
DeleteA bit unnerving. A bit too scary for me. xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteThen you will really hate part 2 then :) Thanks for checking them out though! xoxoxo
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ReplyDeleteDuring my youth I read several times and always ended apocalypse scared, I now understand that the message is one of hope carries no fear!
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