Friday, November 22, 2013

Rhyme Disease (A Poem by Me)



Could have written Shakespeare's sonnets
If given half the time
But have no loving fondness
For making my thoughts rhyme

Who was it that decided
That the fruits of someone’s soul
Should be organized and guided
With rhyming as a goal?

For as a writing tool
It is as nifty as can be
But creatively it’s cruel
And makes one less than free.

So let your heart emerge
In a format all your own
Hold back not that smart urge
Rejoice in style overthrown



(Y ahora una traducción al español a pesar de podría perder un poco en la traducción. Con mucho amor para todos ustedes)


Podría haber escrito sonetos de Shakespeare
Si se les da la mitad del tiempo
Pero no afecto amoroso
Para hacer mis pensamientos rima

Que fue lo que decidió
Que los frutos del alma de alguien
Deben ser organizadas y guiadas
¿Con rimas como meta?

Para como una herramienta de escritura
Es tan ingenioso como puede ser
Pero creativamente es cruel
Y hace menos de gratis.

Deja que tu corazón emergen
En un formato de todos su propio
Retener no ese impulso inteligente
Regocíjense en estilo derrocado




Thank you so much for coming to visit, so amazing to have you stop by.  Wishing you a wonderful weekend and all the best.  Oh so many hugs all around :)





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November 23, 2013 at 12:52 PM

wow! you are good in expressing through peoms! :)

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November 23, 2013 at 6:08 PM

The pictures are so cuuute and the poem too ;)

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November 24, 2013 at 3:52 AM

howlong did it take you to write that? it's awesome!!

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November 24, 2013 at 8:44 PM

Thanks so much, cutie. Very kind of you :)

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November 24, 2013 at 8:44 PM

How very sweet of you, lovely lady :) So appreciate it!

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November 24, 2013 at 8:45 PM

The first stanza came to me at work then sat down and wrote the rest that night when I got home. Thanks, darling, for your encouragement. So wonderful!

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November 25, 2013 at 6:58 AM

Loved the poems and the kitty pics are marvelous!! thank you so much for linking up with my monday linkup Shamu.

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November 25, 2013 at 7:12 AM

Yes, just write in a way that's just you!

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November 25, 2013 at 11:46 AM

Cool! Shall we follow by facebook and bloglovin?
www.supongoestilo.blogspot.nl

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November 25, 2013 at 4:41 PM

Cool poem and love the cat photos.

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November 26, 2013 at 3:09 AM

Love the last part... <3

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November 26, 2013 at 3:35 AM

Loved the poems and the kitty pics are marvelous! Nice blog, would you like to follow each other?
http://rakhshanda-chamberofbeauty.blogspot.fr/

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November 26, 2013 at 4:02 AM

Love the poem and thank you for write in spanish!! I love to read poems! :D I fall in love the last photo... It's perfect....!


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November 26, 2013 at 1:28 PM

HI dear
Oh, thanks for translating your poem to spanish, Love the way you write :)
xoxo

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November 26, 2013 at 4:44 PM

So cool, love that you were able to write this in Spanish too!

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November 26, 2013 at 9:53 PM

Thanks so much and thanks for hosting it too :)

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November 26, 2013 at 9:53 PM

So right, dear. Well said :)

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November 26, 2013 at 9:53 PM

Well I think we already do, sweetie. And I am so glad for it!

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November 26, 2013 at 9:55 PM

Thanks so much and thanks for coming by :)

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November 26, 2013 at 10:02 PM

Of course, dear. Your blog is fantastic. What a gorgeous lady :)

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November 26, 2013 at 10:03 PM

Glad you liked the Spanish, sweetie. Want to make sure to be as inclusive as I can for my sweet readers :)

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November 26, 2013 at 10:04 PM

Wow, thank you so much! You are so kind to me, dear. Make me smile so :)

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November 26, 2013 at 10:04 PM

Thanks, lovely senator. I love how global my followers are so just trying to keep up :)

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November 29, 2013 at 5:43 AM

Very nice poem, and sweet how you translated it into Spanish as well

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November 29, 2013 at 6:26 AM

Thank you, DC. So wonderful to have you stop by. Big fan of your cool blog :)

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December 8, 2013 at 1:41 AM

superbly written, very well expressed!

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