Thursday, October 16, 2014

Heartfelt Song / Canción Sentida



As my love of self awakens
Resurrected after decades dormant
My patience
With judgement
Of my giving
Forgiving
Encouraging
Hopeful self
Wears thin
My tolerance
With neglect
Of my kindness
Devotion
Support
Wanes

Harsh truths
Must be faced
The phrase "too busy"
Needs two words attached
"For you"
Too plus too equals for

Someone cares about me
But which me is that?
The me I am
Or the one they allow me to be?
And if I color outside their lines
Watch the caring
Disappear
Conform
And be the me they want
And be allowed to stay
Perform
The role they assign
Say each and every line
And win the right
To be a tiny part
In their wondrous play.

But what if
What if I am
A star
Me?
What if
All I have to offer
The me I truly am
Is meant to be celebrated
Appreciated?
Does that explain
Why acceptance
Feels like warming sunshine
Exciting, energizing
Fills me with life
And the lack of it
Is poison to my soul?

What sounds like
Bitter chastisement
In reality
Is a tribute
An ode of gratitude
To the loving few
Who take me as I am
Who help lift up this silly man
To heights I have never known
It is to you and you alone
My heart belongs
And for you and you alone
I write this heartfelt song.


Despierta mi amor de sí mismo
Resucitado después de décadas inactivos
Mi paciencia
Con el juicio
Del dar
Perdonar
Alentando
Esperanza auto
Usa delgado
Mi tolerancia
Con negligencia
De mi bondad
Devoción
Apoyo
Se desvanece

Duras verdades
Debe ser enfrentado
La frase "demasiado ocupada"
Necesita dos palabras adjunto
"Para ti"
También además también equivale a para

Alguien se preocupa por mí
¿Pero que es eso?
El yo soy
¿O el que me permite ser?
Y si fuera de sus líneas de color
Cuidado con el cuidado
Desaparecen
Se ajustan
Y el me quieren ser
Y se le permitirá permanecer
Realizar
El papel que ellos asignan
Decir cada línea
Y ganar el derecho
Ser una pequeña parte
En su obra maravillosa.

Pero qué pasa si
¿Qué pasa si soy
Una estrella
¿Yo?
Y si
Todo lo que tengo para ofrecer
El yo soy verdaderamente
Está destinado a ser celebrado
¿Apreciado?
Explica eso
¿Por qué aceptación
Se siente como calienta el sol
Estimulante y energizante
Me llena de vida
Y la falta de él
¿Es veneno para mi alma?

Lo que parece ser
Castigo amargo
En realidad
Es un homenaje
Un himno de gratitud
A los pocos amar
Que aceptarme como soy
Que ayude a levantar este hombre tonto
A alturas nunca he conocido
Es para usted y usted solo
Mi corazón le pertenece
Y por ti y tú solo
Yo escribí esta canción sentida.


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October 17, 2014 at 2:06 AM

Bellissimo come sempre! Ti auguro un weekend stupendo))
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October 17, 2014 at 4:35 AM

Lovely.
Have a nice weekend!

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October 17, 2014 at 5:39 AM

Estoy sin palabras mi adorado poeta.
Son palabras que tocan mi corazon, me hacen reflexionar y me llevan a usar mi mente y pensar a la gratitud de las cosas de la vida.
Gracias. <3
Un beso y feliz viernes
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October 17, 2014 at 6:12 AM

Beautiful words and I love the pics!
Kisses
Paola

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October 17, 2014 at 7:04 AM

Unas bonitas palabras.
Que pases un bonito día.
Besos.

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October 17, 2014 at 2:45 PM

Such a great poem dear.
Have a great weekend
Cheera

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October 18, 2014 at 4:57 AM

Mi dulce poeta, gracias por tus hermosas palabras, son caricias para mi corazón.
Mis pensamientos son variados (algunos llenos de amor y otros tristes). A veces me pregunto por que las personas no piensan un momento antes de hablar y hieren los sentimientos. Son solo pequeños pensamientos, pero muchas gracias por tu carino.
Eres un amor de persona y estoy feliz de tenerte en mi vida.
Un fuerte abrazo y feliz domingo <3
Maggie D.
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October 18, 2014 at 10:14 AM

Loved those pictures and your words are always so beautiful! Loved reading!

Happy Sunday
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October 18, 2014 at 2:07 PM

Hi dear
As always, touching words! love the way you mix ideas and feelings
xoxo

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October 18, 2014 at 2:17 PM

have a nice week end
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kiss

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October 18, 2014 at 4:25 PM

love this poem Shamu, nice words
kiss
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October 18, 2014 at 4:26 PM

Very deep words. But I get the feeling that they are aimed at someone, or several someones. There seems to be an undertone of resentment in some of these words. I admire the way you bring out your feelings in poems. The pictures are really lovely. Have a nice Sunday. xoxoxo

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October 18, 2014 at 8:11 PM

Beautiful poem :) very sweet and full of love. The images are super adorable too, love the collage ins shape of a heart!
XOXO

Milu
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October 19, 2014 at 10:09 AM

Hola mi dulce Rick
Gracias por tus dulces palabras.
Me encanta leer tus comentarios y me haces sentir especial
Un besito y feliz feliz semana
Maggie D.
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October 19, 2014 at 11:01 AM

Beautiful poems and beautiful illustrations.=)

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October 19, 2014 at 5:03 PM

I dunno... Your poem is beautifully written but I'm starting to wonder if you are looking for acceptance with the right people. I mean people are tolerant (somewhat) and as my boyfriend say "handle every stressful situation like a puppy : if you can't play with it, pee on it and walk away :P)"

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October 19, 2014 at 7:11 PM

of course you are a star :) sorry to have neglected your blog for so long, your writing is awesome

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