Saturday, November 1, 2014

Oasis


Shoulder first
Through the door
One eye ahead
One guards the stoop
Aromas
Of spices and wine
Music
Rhythmic, sensual
Veils swirl
At the center of the room
Finger cymbals clang
Disrupting focus
A face hidden but for large brown eyes
Shining bright, yet curious, promising
A stomach
Undulating
With precision and purpose
Alluring, beckoning
Distracting
Return to reality
Remember the mission
But first
Precious water so long denied
Bartender shoots a quizzical look
Farsi foggy from fatigue
Finally found
Leave the pitcher
Bring two more
Target still half a nation away
Tell myself
Keep moving
Stay invisible
Notice that the music has stopped
Dancer sitting beside me
Dedication takes the night off


Primero los hombros
A través de la puerta
Un ojo adelante
Uno guarda el pórtico
Aromas
De especias y vino
Música
Rítmico, sensual
Velos de remolino
En el centro de la habitación
Clang platillos de dedo
Interrumpir el foco
Una cara ocultada, pero de grandes ojos marrones
Brillante brillante, sin embargo, curioso, prometiendo
Un estómago
Ondulado
Con precisión y propósito
Seductora, hace señas
Distracción
Volver a la realidad
Recuerda la misión
Pero primero
Agua preciosa tanto tiempo negada
Camarero dispara una mirada burlona
Farsi brumoso de la fatiga
Finalmente encontró
Deja la jarra
Traer dos más
Objetivo aún medio una nación.
Digo a mí mismo
Sigue moviéndote
Permanecer invisibles
Observe que la música se ha detenido
Bailarina sentada a mi lado
Dedicación quita la noche


Share

Related Post

Oasis
4/ 5
Oleh

Subscribe via email

Don't miss a post, have it deliver to your email

33 comments

Tulis comments
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:08 AM

Hahaha! I LOVEEEEE this post!
:) have a nice day hun!
With love

Beth
Rebirth - Beth Kubler diary

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:23 AM

Awww..such brautiful poem..touched my heart..it,s a bit different and mysterious. The words you used are amazing. I have no word to describe their beauty. Wish you a lovely Sunday !!!

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 5:23 AM

Buenos dias mi dulce Rick,
despues que lei este hermoso poema, cerré los ojos y pude imagianr una bella bailarina. Tu haces magia con tus palabras y logras llegar en la mente de las personas que te quieren como yo.
Me fascinan las imagenes que colgastes de estas magicas mujeres.
Un beso y feliz domingo.
Maggie Dallospedale Fashion diary - Fashion blog

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 6:36 AM

Beautiful blog post.=) I hope you have had a lovely weekend.

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:31 AM

I am charmed with the photographies.
Great post.
Kiss

http://mypersonalkloset.blogspot.com.es/2014/10/el-armario-de-marikilla-lady-vintage.html

http://mypersonalkloset.blogspot.com.es/2014/11/el-armario-de-marikilla-skirt-holes.html

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 10:41 AM

interesting post and amazing pics Shamu
http://tr3ndygirl.com
have a nice day
kiss

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 11:42 AM

Hi dear
Oh sexy! this poem is full of inspo!
xoxo

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 1:46 PM

Nice dance ! On a side-note you totally lost me on your last comment. I might be slow ^^

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:01 PM

Hello,

Ohh, wahou ! :D
Very nice !
I love your comment ! :)

Sarah, http://sarahmodeee.blogspot.fr/

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:59 PM

Nice words but I'm not really sure I understand where they're going. xoxoxo

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:30 PM

Thank you gorgeous! Much love for you too :)

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:30 PM

Such a kind comment, dear! I was trying something different so I am glad you liked it :)

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:32 PM

Gracias mucho cariño Maggie! En cualquier momento puedo tocarte me hace muy feliz y sus palabras son tan alentadoras para mí!!!!!! Te amo a tanto cariño!!! Grandes besos :)

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:32 PM

Thank you so much and I hope yours was great too :)

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:33 PM

You are so kind! And a big kiss for you too :) Thanks!

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:33 PM

Thank you so much, beautiful. Kisses for you too :)

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:33 PM

I like that comment so much, sweetie! I was hoping someone would look at it this way :) xoxo

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:34 PM

Thank you gorgeous! It was referencing an Instagram comment you made. You are not slow, just really busy I am sure :)

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:35 PM

Oh thank you so much, dear! That is wonderful of you to say, very happy for me :) xoxo

Reply
avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:36 PM

Thanks so much, sweetie! I was trying something a little different, it is the middle of a story, told sort of in poem, sort of just streaming free. Glad you liked it! xoxoxo

Reply
avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:00 AM

Buenos dias mi dulce Rick,
paso a desearte el mad bello de los lunes
Un beso
Maggie Dallospedale Fashion diary - Fashion blog

Reply
avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:39 AM

Looks amazing dear!

There's a new outfit online, I'm waiting for you!
BABYWHATSUP.COM

Reply
avatar
November 3, 2014 at 9:10 AM

fantastic poem,sounds very good
have a nice day
http://tr3ndygirl.com

Reply
avatar
November 3, 2014 at 2:09 PM

Woah, amazing!! Love the poem and the pictures! So exotic and lovely!

♘ www.sugarpopfashion.com ♘

Reply
avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:57 PM

Thank so much darling lady :) Kisses!

Reply
avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:58 PM

That is so kind of you! Thanks :)

Reply
avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:58 PM

And you are so very sweet :) Thanks!

Reply
avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:37 AM

I am really liking the play of words but a bit difficult for me to get them :p sorry I am a bit thick in the head. But I am sure, it is something amazing coz it sounds beautiful. Definitely you're talking about the belly dancer heehee.. Lovely paintings there!

Reply

It would be so lovely to hear from you. I promise to respond either here or on your blog.