Your eyes pulse with a gleaming fire
One color but many shades
Awash with
Grief
Passion
Angles
Patterns
Radiance
Life
Floor
To
Ceiling
Portals
To the you
That you
Believe
Firmly hope
No one
Notices
The world
So busy
Has not the time
To look inside
And you sigh
Relief
And you weep
Alone
Brave face
Joking
Smiling
Diverting
Averting gazes
That probe
Too deep
Until
For a handful
Of pristine
Powerful
Pure
Moments
You share it all
Without fear
Without words
With weight
Once crushing
Now relieved
And then
Retreat
Regret
Reappearing
Fears
Crippling
Hide
And no seek
Shiny, damp
Tears
Cloud your once
Alive
Eyes
El pulso de los ojos con un brillante fuego
Un color pero muchos tonos
Inundado de
Duelo
Pasión
Ángulos
Patrones de
Resplandor
Vida
Piso
Para
Techo
Portales
El te
¿Eres tú
Creer
Espero firmemente
Nadie
Avisos
El mundo
Tan ocupado
Tiene no es el momento
Para observar el interior
Y suspiras
Socorro
Y lloras
Solo
Cara valiente
Broma
Sonriendo
Desviar
Evitar miradas
La sonda
Demasiado profundo
Hasta
Por un puñado
Prístina
Potente
Puro
Momentos
Compartes todo
Sin miedo
Sin palabras
Con el peso
Machacar una vez
Ahora relevado
Y luego
Retiro
Arrepentimiento
Reapareciendo
Miedos
Paralizan
Ocultar
Y no buscan
Brillante, húmedo
Lágrimas
Su vez la nube
Viva
Ojos
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Hide and No Seek (A Poem by Me) / Ocultar y No buscan (un poema por Me)
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Tulis commentsvery beautiful and poignant
ReplyThanks so much, darling :) Always glad for our visits
ReplyLOvely and very moving
Replyxoxo
Very kind of you, Sweet Amy. Always so glad for your visits xoxo :)
ReplyHi dear!
Replybeautiful and intense poem, as always you touch our hearts :)
xoxo
Que bonito!!!!
ReplyBesos
Thank you so much, sweetheart :) What an amazing thing to say!
ReplyMaravilloso de que digas eso. Muchas gracias por visitarnos, hermosa dama. Besos
ReplyThank you so much, lovely one xx :)
ReplyWow this is a very deep well written poem! you did an amazing job with choice of words!
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This is beautiful. It's so hard to work through grief while the world goes on and you feel like saying "Don't you understand what just happened?!"
ReplyAwwww, that is wonderful of you to say :) Thanks so much! Amazing to have you stop by :)
ReplyIt is exactly then we feel the smallness of the drop of water we are in the human ocean. It just makes the loss that much deeper. Thanks for coming by and the kind words :)
ReplyJust beautiful!! very very deep well written poem! you did an amazing job, really love it! You know I'm just crazy about poems full with emotions! Have a great day <3
Replygood post!
ReplySuch a beautiful and accurate depiction of what so many of us do. We bear the burden, feel relieved if we let some out and then the embarrassment of having shown that part of ourselves. Gorgeous.
Replyit is soo cool!
ReplyNice poem Shamu !
ReplyI can log to uour blog again ! (yayyyy )
May I ask what you do in life ? (you don't have to answer ^^)
http://www.melolimparfaite.com
Quite the bard you have become...
ReplyThank you SO much gorgeous. That is awesome of you. More to come :)
ReplyThank you so much, dear. So enjoy your lovely blog :)
ReplyWow! Thanks so much. That is a wonderful compliment and I really appreciate it. Thanks for visiting too :)
ReplyThank you, dear. So glad you enjoyed it :)
ReplyThank you, sweet one :) So glad you made it back on. I have to stay somewhat vague on my job but basically I work in front of a computer all day in a role that I get to help people in staying completely anonymous doing so. It is much technical work and requires quite a bit of concentration. I really enjoy it. Been there 10 years now.
ReplyA bard is where the chickens are kept when you have a cold :) Fred translation: Thank you so much...and now it is time to make the sleeping!
Replymeybe follow?
ReplyShamu this poem very emotionally :)
Replythanks for your lovely comment
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Well of course I will follow you. You have a cool blog :)
ReplySo glad you liked it, lovely one :) Thanks for the sweet words!
ReplyI love your blog, it’s amazing!
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Kisses, Alis.
Wow, lots of kisses for you too dear. You have a fantastic blog yourself. So enjoyed checking it out :) Thanks so much!
ReplyThanks so much. Yes I will follow your cute and gorgeous blog :)
ReplyOK I understand :) I'm glad you like it ;)
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wow... bout time I found a comment from skips... yeesh.... and the bard just got closed up for the night... thought youd want to know the girls were secure....
ReplyIt would be so lovely to hear from you. I promise to respond either here or on your blog.