Thursday, September 17, 2015

Revelations XIII: Cleansing / Revelaciones XIII: Limpieza



Previously in Revelations:  Taken twice to witness the end of all things, our hero finally faces his destiny and accepts the task given him by a shining stranger:  Protect the bloodlines of the two men that may one day bring hope for a new future.
Upon finally returning to his hometown of London after a harrowing journey, our hero must help his young charge, Louisa, adjust to her new life, even as ghosts of the old one still haunt her...

Anteriormente en el Apocalipsis: toma dos veces para presenciar el fin de todas las cosas, nuestro héroe finalmente se enfrenta a su destino y acepta la tarea que le había dado un extraño brillante: Proteger las líneas de sangre de los dos hombres de que algún día podría traer la esperanza de un nuevo futuro.
A fin de regresar a su ciudad natal de Londres después de un angustioso viaje, nuestro héroe tiene que ayudar a su joven pupilo, Louisa, a adaptarse a su nueva vida, aun cuando todavía se ciernen sobre ella fantasmas de la antigua ...
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The dawn had just arrived
When a weary Romeo bore us
To the edges of great London
Straightaway I made for a peddler
Of frocks and garments most fine
For neither my charge or I
Presented the best of ourselves
In clothes that reflected our weariness so well
And in entering Louisa didst gasp in surprise
Never had she seen such beautiful garb
As she looked down at her scruffy dress
Tattered and rife with holes
And then up to the gowns surrounding us
Her face was made red as flame
A look of such embarrassment and shame
Wiped away by the combination
Of my hand on her shoulder
And the kind eyes of the shopkeeper
And thus to shopping we went
Several grand choices were made for us both
To make us look like denizens
Of this modern town
Paid for and then carried by me
As I led Louisa atop Romeo
To my humble abode

Upon arrival it was with great relief I noted
The absence of the ethereal vandalism
That once marked my wall
Informing me of Carrickfergus
And the head full of red curls
Awaiting my protection there
A bath was drawn and I didst wait outside
As my young friend washed herself
Knowing the deeper stains she now bore
Would be years in the cleansing
And then she emerged, so lovely
Sporting the dress I bade her wear
A fashionable number made of chintz
Soft and feminine
She made a fine lady and I told her so
Her knees bowed slightly
One leg behind her
Pulling at each side of her dress
A sweet if clumsy courtesy
Her eyes searching mine for approval
Which I provided with a broad smile
And my arm around her tight
"Linger here a moment, duchess,
Whilst I make myself a proper escort for thee"
Giggles followed me as I went inside.

Once I made ready we set out afoot for our destination
The new home of young Louisa
For as much as I adored her
My life was far too fraught with oddity and peril
To share with anyone
And I explained all this
In answer to her please that it be otherwise
Assuring her I would never be too far away
That she would ever be out of my protection
Though I doubted she would have need of it
So then the questions of her new life began
And I entreated her to be patient
As I had a tale to impart
That would make it all as clear as day
And so, arm in arm
Her attention captured fully I began
"Before you, there was
Another"



El amanecer acababa de llegar
Cuando un Romeo cansados ​​nos parió
Para los bordes de gran Londres
Enseguida hice para un vendedor ambulante
De los vestidos y prendas más finas
Porque ni mi cargo o yo
Presentado el mejor de nosotros mismos
En la ropa que reflejaban nuestro cansancio tan bien
Y al entrar en Louisa hiciste grito ahogado de sorpresa
Nunca había visto tan hermoso atuendo
Al mirar hacia abajo en su vestido desaliñado
Hecha andrajos y lleno de agujeros
Y luego hasta los vestidos que nos rodean
Su rostro se hizo rojo como la llama
Una expresión de tal vergüenza y la vergüenza
Borrado por la combinación
De mi mano en el hombro
Y los amables ojos del tendero
Y así nos fuimos de compras
Varios grandes decisiones fueron hechas para los dos
Para hacernos ver como habitantes
De esta ciudad moderna
Pagado y luego llevado por mí
Como dirigí Louisa alto de Romeo
A mi humilde morada

A su llegada fue con gran alivio señalé
La ausencia del vandalismo etéreo
Que una vez marcado mi pared
Informándome de Carrickfergus
Y la cabeza llena de rizos rojos
En espera de mi protección no
Un baño se elaboró ​​y me didst esperar fuera
Como mi joven amigo lava a sí misma
Conocer las manchas más profundas que ahora llevaba
Sería año en la limpieza
Y entonces surgió ella, tan hermosa
Luciendo el vestido que pedí su desgaste
Una serie de moda hecha de zaraza
Suave y femenina
Ella hizo una dama y le dije lo
Sus rodillas se inclinaron ligeramente
Una pierna detrás de ella
Tirando a cada lado de su vestido
Un dulce si cortesía torpe
Sus ojos buscando los míos para su aprobación
¿Qué he proporcionado con una amplia sonrisa
Y mi brazo alrededor de su apretada
"Quédese aquí un momento, duquesa,
Mientras me hago una escolta adecuada para ti "
Risitas me siguió como entré.

Una vez hice listos que nos propusimos en curso de realización de nuestro destino
El nuevo hogar de la joven Louisa
Por tanto como yo la adoraba
Mi vida era demasiado llena de extrañeza y peligro
Para compartir con nadie
Y le expliqué todo esto
En respuesta a su favor, que sea de otro modo
Asegurándole que nunca sería demasiado lejos
Que ella volvería a ser de mi protección
Aunque yo dudaba que tendría necesidad de ella
Entonces comenzaron las preguntas de su nueva vida
Y yo le rogué que ser paciente
Como yo tenía un cuento para impartir
Eso haría que todo tan claro como el día
Y así, brazo en brazo
Su atención capturado totalmente empecé
"Antes, no había
Otro "


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September 18, 2015 at 1:43 AM

such a strong description of Louisa's look!!! ahah I can see her :))))) pleasing and shy!
I'm very curious about the "Another", I wonder what our hero is starting to tell her!

Today, I send you another basket, it's full of hugs, as usual, and you can find inside many slices of you-know-what :)))))
Have a a great day dear friend!!

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September 18, 2015 at 2:26 AM

Louisa is safe at sound at the moment, but the story gets more interesting...what was before and what is to follow? Great writing.

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September 18, 2015 at 5:39 AM

Awww, so beautiful! Liked the part about Louisa's dressing so much. Another wonderful chapter dear!

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September 18, 2015 at 5:52 AM

That's a good look! ;)
Have a nice weekend :)

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September 18, 2015 at 7:34 AM

Wauw you really are a good writer!

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September 18, 2015 at 12:47 PM

wow,i love your description
so beautifully written

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September 18, 2015 at 1:31 PM

Wowww me encanto la descrcion del look de Louisa.
Muy bien escrito y muy emocionante.
Eres un verdadero artista escribiendo
un beso
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September 18, 2015 at 5:17 PM

Que lindo super profundo palavras vinda da alma, bom final de semana
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September 18, 2015 at 8:29 PM

Are they slices of sweet acceptance...or is it more home made pasta from your bathroom :) I am so glad you like dear Louisa. She was such a sweet lady. Still rolling around in my basket of hugs, enjoying every one so much :)

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September 18, 2015 at 8:30 PM

Thanks so much, dear! Yes, I told it a bit out of order but, hey, it all happened a few hundred years ago so I can be forgiven for wandering a bit :) Prequel 1 coming next!

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September 18, 2015 at 8:31 PM

So very sweet of you my dear!! Wanted to slow down a minute before we part ways with sweet Louisa.

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September 18, 2015 at 8:31 PM

Thank you so much! I hope yours is great too :)

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September 18, 2015 at 8:32 PM

Well how nice of you! Thanks :)

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September 18, 2015 at 8:32 PM

Thanks so much!! I appreciate it :)

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September 18, 2015 at 8:33 PM

That is a wonderful compliment!!! Thank you so much, that touches my heart dear. Kisses

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September 19, 2015 at 7:29 AM

ALlright, now why blogging ? Why don't you find an editor "pronto ?"

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September 19, 2015 at 7:30 AM

(maybe I meant publisher ? You know what I meant right ?)

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September 19, 2015 at 9:16 AM

I like writings that are out of order, they seem to me more true to life, that only seems to be lived linerally while in fact time itself is a far more tricky concept.

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September 19, 2015 at 11:44 AM

Very nice post my friend <3 kiss :-)
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September 19, 2015 at 12:41 PM

You should take up writing professionally :)

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September 19, 2015 at 4:01 PM

You are really a talented writer!
Every time you amaze me with your stories
Kisses
Paola ♡
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September 19, 2015 at 8:37 PM

It sounds like you are well equipped for the nature of my story telling. Especially at a part far distant where the ability to keep timelines straight will be very handy :)

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September 19, 2015 at 8:39 PM

Haha no not at all. I was deeply insulted ;)P I do feel like I need an editor sometimes when my poems get so long, but then I just say oh well, I like them that way :) Now a publisher, yes, I would like one please. Do you have one handy?

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September 19, 2015 at 8:42 PM

Many kisses and thanks dear :)

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September 19, 2015 at 8:42 PM

That is so sweet of you to say, dear. It is my dream and always has been. Thanks so much!

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September 19, 2015 at 8:43 PM

I am so glad you enjoy them, dear. Means alot to me :) Kisses

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September 19, 2015 at 8:55 PM

So interesting! You should really publish this someday
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September 19, 2015 at 10:20 PM

i'm back..i miss commenting...this is so interesting in the poem,,it will make a good movie...

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September 20, 2015 at 2:35 AM

The last 3 novels I read had a lot of jumps back and forth in time, but I didn't found it too confusing, it just takes a bit more concentration to follow.

Have a lovely day!

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September 20, 2015 at 7:07 AM

Lovely post as always Rick!

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September 20, 2015 at 7:32 AM

So interesting post!
Have a nice week-end!
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